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Prince Meteor: Precursor pt 10 - Application Redux

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Here's the FINALE! :boogie: Glad I could make it!


Please critique and comment! I would love to know what you think.

Prince Meteor Book 1: Equinox: Upcoming 2013
Previous: Precursor pt 9 - Residuum
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Alright, finale of the first part. The first part with Lycos was interesting to say the least. I find it a bit odd a kid would not react a bit more to killing someone, but it might be the culture.

As always, I really like the combat scenes and how the different characters adapt to what's going on around them. Also, Titia with an afro made me laugh.

And, on Vahan- a true friend, indeed. I liked it when Lycos saw how much his friend had looked out for him. Also, the bit about what he must be was nice and powerful. A string of words to end this part of Lycos' story.

I'm certainly interested to see where the story goes from here. I hope you liked all the reviews.