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Prince Meteor: Precursor pt 8 - Impact

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Whoops, nearly missed today! NaNo stinks. :zombie:

Love this part. :love:
Next: Precursor pt 9 - Residuum
Previous: Precursor pt 7 - The Tournament
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So now we Gethi, beings that can resist Galva. I wonder if they're just a different race from the main character or a just a group of people with natural abilities.

A powerful chapter and the Gethi certainly lived up the hype produced from the Queen's reaction to him. Nothing to really nit-pick other than Vahan's yell on page three. I'm with the camp that sounds should not be sounded out in stories, but written, even more so when it is in all caps. Of course, that's just a personal thing. I think it fits under 'Show, don't tell'.

Anyway, this promises an epic conclusion that I'm off to read.